Wednesday, July 2, 2014

my writing (conclusion)

After considering both sides of the argument, my opinion is that businesses have the buggest responsibility. Businesses have to make sure that all of their products are safe for coustomers to use. The businesses also have to pay for their product, managing money is a big responsibility. Sure coustomers have responsibilities as well, but they are very simple compared to the businesses responsibilities.

This part of my writing shows how I used punctuation to enhance my writing.
I believe I am at extended abstract because I can use punctuation for effect to enhance my writing.

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