Friends Poem

Rain is the lie I believed that broke away the chain of trust
Then the storm came and carried away the love
But friends are like stars, they come and go
And I guess its your time to leave
And someone elses time to shine

I am extended abstract because i used personification, metaphor and similie and adapted them to my poem

My poem

Upset is tons of filthy rubbish in the beautiful ocean. Unhappy is the beautiful sea life dying before our eyes. Horrified is that many harmless sea animals died because of our rubbish. Ashamed is being the makers of the disgusting rubbish. Do you even care?

My commentary

http://audioboo.fm/boos/1555658

Here is my commentary on animals acting as humans.

The speaking strategies i used effectively where speaking clearly and describing what happened.

I have improved on using clear speaking.

A next step for me is speaking with expression.

Passion project

I am working on my project with Natasha and Isabella. We are studying pythons rainbow lorikeets and bottle nosed dolphins. We chose to do this because we want to learn about different animals. We know we are done when we have met the success criteria. Criteria: - Pre structural: I need help to analyse a pythons ecosystem. - uni structural: I can analyse one relevant idea about th pythons ecosystem. - multi structural: I can analyse several relevant ideas about the pythons ecosystem. - relational: I can analyse several relevant ideas about the pythons ecosystem and explain what would happen if a member of the food chain was missing. - extended abstract: I can analyse the purpose of the food chain groups in the koalas ecosystem.

maths video

I am at tended abstract because i created this video to teach others about finding a slope.