Wednesday, June 18, 2014

my writing

In the first example, the faulty baby carrier, a company was selling faulty (broken or damaged) products to unknowing consumers (customers). The rights and responsibilities that were broken were: the business (a person or group who provides goods or services) was selling faulty goods and the company was plagiarizing (taking and using ideas) the original company. As a result, the consumers child could be badly injured and the consumer would be wasting money on a faulty product. Consequently, the business will loose customers and will not be trusted.

This piece of writing shows how I used punctuation to add meaning to my writing.
I believe I am at extended abstract because I can use punctuation for effect to enhance meaning.
There is no next step.

Thursday, June 12, 2014

My Maths

WALT: devise a strategy to solve a fraction number problem 

I think I am at extended abstract because I can create something that shows others how to do this.
First, you find the fractions:

1 3/8 and 5 1/8

Then you add them together because it asks how much milk did they drink in all.
Add the whole numbers first.

5+1= 6

Then, you add the fractions, you add them by adding the numerators and keeping the denominator the same.

3/8 + 1/8= 4/8

Then you simplify 4/8 to 1/2

And you get 6 1/2