Wednesday, May 28, 2014

My Writing

WALT: I can use punctuation correctly in my writing

My goal was to use commas and colons effectively. This part of my writing shows that I have correctly used commas and colons.

Over the six short years in Nirvana, Kurtz and the band achieved many things. In total, the band won ten awards: one American music award, one Brit award, one Grammy, five MTV video music awards and one NME award. Kurtz himself won three awards: best new artist in 1992 and best alternative video in 1993 and 1994. The band sold 75 million albums world wide and Smells Like Teen Spirit was their biggest single.

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