Honestly, New Zealand should change its flag because it looks too much like Australias. The two flags are the same colours and have the same patterns. Both of the flags have the union jack and the southern cross.Having a similar flag could be confusing for tourists. They mioght think we are part of Austrailia when we are not! We could solve this problem by changing the flag.
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